Monica

//Dear Vivian how have you been? I haven’t seen you in awhile and alot of the girls are wondering where you are. I want to thank you for stopping Maynard from hurting me.// //Dusty and me are friends again and it all thanks to you. I’m also wondering what did happen to father Maynard was he called be the lord or just being a coward? I would like to thank you one more time for every thing that you did for me.// //Sincerely Monica//

//Ashton, Again, you have understood the main points of this section. I would like to see you try to "go deeper" in you writing by giving more explination of how you are feeling about hte situation. Add specific details. Please do some proofreading work...You need to fix some formatting,and punctuation.// Mrs. S